It was outside,
stars drowned in shame,
drawing out your name,
...on the sky which never changed...
[ like in that lullaby ]
and watched the sun go down,
He smiled faintly in the distance,
for that vague resistance,
...Moon child how you've changed...
[ like in that lullaby about the vampires ]
"We were crying out"
as the sun came up upon us,
it was okay, i smiled,
cause you were so happy to die.
...our lips never changed...
[ like in that lullaby ]
and if you would see me,
somewhere close but far,
and i didn't know you,
I'd wonder what you are...
Moon child.
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Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
jagvetattduvet - 5 dec 08 - 11:42- Betyg: |
Wow! Fantastiskt bra!
Jag kmr att tänka på Bellas Lullaby i serien "Twilight".
Det här var verkligen UNDERBART vackert! |
gbg_95 - 5 dec 08 - 10:35- Betyg: |
VACKERT...<33 |
Morningmist - 6 nov 08 - 19:30- Betyg: |
"stars drowned in shame,
drawing out your name
...on the sky which never changed..."
Dina ord fängslade mig
redan i det första stycket <3
"and if you would see me,
somewhere close but far"
Someone slap me,
I think I've gone to heaven! <3
DUKTIG! ;* |
TokioHotel4ever - 6 nov 08 - 15:41 |
gud vad vacker och bra |
Douleur - 6 nov 08 - 15:31- Betyg: |
åh
himla bra <3 |
GothicQueen - 6 nov 08 - 15:20 |
Denna dikt skrev jag efter att ha sett filmen "Moon Child",
en vampyr-film med Gackt och Hyde (hotties!) som huvudpersoner och nära vänner.
^^ Det följde liksom som en fin idé ... <3 |