If I died tonight,well thats fine.
It's just a thin line between life and death
If I died tonight, will anyone remember me?
Have I made any impression?
If I died tonight,I'll go straight to hell that's all I've to tell.
I would burn real well.
If you died tonight, that would be worse then death to me.
I would'nt make it trough.
If you died tonight,I would never forget you.
I will never leave you behind.
If you died tonight,I could never see you again.
Because I know I don't belong in heaven...
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| Kommentarer - (Snittbetyg: 5) |
| Ramone1 - 2 mar 08 - 18:33 |
| Tackar :) |
| Ramone1 - 26 feb 08 - 23:04 |
| Ska man skriva på engelska,ska man skriva bra engelska så är det bara xD |
| MagicLove - 26 feb 08 - 07:59 |
| bra engelska ;-)fiiin dikt! |
| Ramone1 - 25 feb 08 - 18:16 |
| Tackar för era generösa komplimanger :) |
| kiduche - 25 feb 08 - 02:13 |
| va vacker ... |
| angels_eyes - 25 feb 08 - 01:59 |
underbart strukturerad, känsla trots att du har en modell att gå på
Ovanligt |
| Ramone1 - 25 feb 08 - 01:02 |
| Tackar :) |
XlonelygirlX - 25 feb 08 - 00:25- Betyg:  |
| underbar :) |
| Ramone1 - 25 feb 08 - 00:04 |
| Tack :) |
| Ramone1 - 24 feb 08 - 23:59 |
| Tackar igen, du är alldeles för genrös med komplimanger :) |
| Freaket_93 - 24 feb 08 - 23:40- Betyg: |
Åh, underbarunderbarunderbar!
Sista meningen berörde verkligen |
| dikter - 24 feb 08 - 23:06 |
| fint |
